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This paper is already written and very simple, I just need for you to proofread, edit, add to it and rewrite it, please follow the direction on the attachment. **Introductory paragraph (3-5 sentences), ***3-5 additional paragraphs (8-10 sentences per each paragraph) ***Concluding paragraph (3-5 sentences) Each paragraph should have atopic sentence, detail sentences, and a concluding sentence. Please keep this simple.